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And now I’m that little lame balloonman,
all knobbled feet and goat face.
I twist balloon animals from discarded condoms to make
a Durex poodle and a Trojan horse.
I offer them freely, hoping for nothing
more than a smile to steal, but no
one smiles anymore.

I steel at autumn, the winter-come-lately,
and lounge stiff against a light-and-ice pole.
I see him there, Ginsberg, shivering man of rags, and he
leers the old man at the chessboard, the one playing with no partner,
the one tasting the king and swallowing a pawn.
Who is waiting for whom, I wonder?
They both look hungry.

I startle as the Great Figure rolls a quiet, ruby line by.
The emergency is over or not yet begun.
In the humdrum silence of the crisp air,
I tell secrets and secrets.
To the expectant ducks I give away
the last of you, the little bits held between youandme
that I have no place for in myself.

I speak your secrets like an ancient religion,
something beautiful and forgotten. I say to the trees
how you told me you hadn’t always loved larking, and
then how you taught me how to dance. I laugh and
tell the wind your tiny quirks and endearing flaws,
and about that time we fought and never forgave.
I tell a rock your darkest, oldest fears, and it
doesn’t laugh or cry.

I tell a few newborn secrets of mine,
of lonely days and frigid nights.
Giving away those bits of me,
I give away the very last bits of you,
and stand,
leaving my balloon animals behind.
I notice the men have gone, and
the ducks, too. The chill deepens, and
I count the sunsets ‘till spring.
I shake my locks at that runaway sun,
and depart as air.

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Before you comment, fave, or leave, please take a moment to read the following works:

in Just-- by e e cummings
A Supermarket in California by Allen Ginsberg
The Great Figure by William Carlos Williams
Not Waving But Drowning by Stevie Smith
Song of Myself by Walt Whitman


Anyway, I don't know. Tell me what you think.

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Congratulations on the DD! :iconflowerheartplz:
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Well I think it's well written...
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Mood: Joy ~machariart Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow!
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~HonnuArt Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It put me there- on that cold night in the park- watching this man. Beautiful.
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~FlufflyHATE Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhhhh, Comdoms?~ :la:
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~agalakachikaboum Dec 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wonderful. I can see the feelings in this... It is one of the best poems I've ever saw in my life. Great job.
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Mood: Love ~TerrorThirzje Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's an very amazing thing to read, there is so much beauty in there and so much more beyond. Beautyfully done :)
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!daydreamer1324 Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, just beautiful. The mood it conveys is interesting. I love the other poems, too.
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~Silverspark14 Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel so accomplished that I got the Whitman reference ^^

Great job, this is beautiful and thought-provoking.
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