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Untitled Haiku the Fourteenth

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an old rhythm—
red rain-slick bench drips
on a fallen leaf
:shrug:
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It actually took me a few reads to get what this was describing. Then I thought: Oh, yeah, it's obvious what that means! I'm not very clever today. :slow:

Actually it sounded good when I didn't get it. Now that I do get it, it's still good, but in a different kind of way.

You should write a haiku that doesn't really mean anything, and see what people get from it. If you wanted to.